The wording in this ad for Crystal Light Lemonade gave me pause.
Do I have to mix Crystal Light Lemonade AND the sweet tang from a natural lemon to attain a pitcher of magical sunshine?
Here is an idea for a better choice of wording -
Stir up a pitcher of sunshine WITH the sweet tang of natural lemon in Crystal Light Lemonade.
2 comments:
That's a GREAT catch!
I completely agree with you on this. Great find--and an even better edit! :)
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